tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post2875908608700575503..comments2023-10-23T13:54:43.429-07:00Comments on Sheery Hall: Second Campaigner Challenge - Conceivably Broken ImagoSheeryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03637480264361449874noreply@blogger.comBlogger45125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-46257413142757665012011-10-02T19:12:47.022-07:002011-10-02T19:12:47.022-07:00Love the TV twist at the end. I'm at #183.Love the TV twist at the end. I'm at #183.kjmckendryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07534751311630921447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-52139217423576752922011-10-02T19:02:59.322-07:002011-10-02T19:02:59.322-07:00Good job, good usage of required words, good story...Good job, good usage of required words, good story.the wild magnoliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14355836751549469688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-71930225614281646752011-10-02T15:47:32.582-07:002011-10-02T15:47:32.582-07:00Well done ! A smart move on your part in the way y...Well done ! A smart move on your part in the way you approached the challenge ! Unique ...<br />My entry is no.#185MISHhttp://writer-in-transit.co.za/campaign-challenge-no-2/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-41998526771397225412011-10-01T19:11:56.153-07:002011-10-01T19:11:56.153-07:00Great entry! I wonder what's going to happen t...Great entry! I wonder what's going to happen to the mother now...Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-11894322005142474562011-10-01T03:55:18.065-07:002011-10-01T03:55:18.065-07:00What a unique twist on the challenge! Took me comp...What a unique twist on the challenge! Took me completely by surprise. I'm number 128Elizabeth Varadan, Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01708206753256682635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-41335394397056311302011-09-30T11:25:44.525-07:002011-09-30T11:25:44.525-07:00Great twist! Those four months are nasty. ;)Great twist! Those four months are nasty. ;)Carlahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15380048190884905579noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-87953074282949001672011-09-29T17:24:35.521-07:002011-09-29T17:24:35.521-07:00You certainly painted a perfectly gruesome scene.....You certainly painted a perfectly gruesome scene... and that twist! Well done. I love the name Cadence, too. (I have a male character with that name.) ;) Good luck with the challenge!Avery Marshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15615057600393412922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-623460661901921952011-09-29T00:06:49.970-07:002011-09-29T00:06:49.970-07:00Well done, and good luck. ;-)Well done, and good luck. ;-)Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05322234219197041788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-48094653733291250272011-09-28T01:21:15.183-07:002011-09-28T01:21:15.183-07:00Yes the twist clinched it!Yes the twist clinched it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-16897791842648829612011-09-26T19:54:26.859-07:002011-09-26T19:54:26.859-07:00Great twist! Loved it :)Great twist! Loved it :)Jessica Therrienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08075397024734371669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-69134948647831010952011-09-26T13:50:09.291-07:002011-09-26T13:50:09.291-07:00Brilliant twist at the end, great job!Brilliant twist at the end, great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-37137571570534559322011-09-26T11:30:09.096-07:002011-09-26T11:30:09.096-07:00Wow that was so intense! I love it! I really like ...Wow that was so intense! I love it! I really like how the speaker in the passage is so passive about what's happened (because she's in shock) and it makes the entire thing creepier! Wonderful job! I'm a new follower too!<br />(I'm entry #113)Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02000569858548717605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-7268518322636140682011-09-25T23:00:39.740-07:002011-09-25T23:00:39.740-07:00This is well written, and I was surprised by the t...This is well written, and I was surprised by the twist.Mynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07595087387069634003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-42034168475329263392011-09-25T18:48:59.148-07:002011-09-25T18:48:59.148-07:00That was so good!!That was so good!!Doreen McGettiganhttp://www.doreenmcgettigan.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-54841251424266386792011-09-25T13:56:41.097-07:002011-09-25T13:56:41.097-07:00Very nice! Good luck!Very nice! Good luck!Krista McLaughlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09230770035490273428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-50462224832082200432011-09-24T14:54:36.148-07:002011-09-24T14:54:36.148-07:00Well done! Good luck!Well done! Good luck!Lorelei Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03294047277447613989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-35476259674016963372011-09-24T10:24:37.264-07:002011-09-24T10:24:37.264-07:00Good job on using the words in the challenge! Good...Good job on using the words in the challenge! Good luck in the contest.Brindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09809660700359597836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-71881003995765701402011-09-23T13:03:05.535-07:002011-09-23T13:03:05.535-07:00Good story! Love the ending, Sherry!Good story! Love the ending, Sherry!Zan Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00166450116524323462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-66189669084350869342011-09-23T10:25:15.441-07:002011-09-23T10:25:15.441-07:00I didn't get that it was a soap opera until I ...I didn't get that it was a soap opera until I read other people's comments! Dark stuff, with the senile mother!Cortney Pearsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00774060537148628453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-85619250824549292042011-09-23T07:57:22.950-07:002011-09-23T07:57:22.950-07:00Great incorporation! I did something similar but y...Great incorporation! I did something similar but you got that twist in there. Love it! Check out #24. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428537878590963832noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-19437667416973013352011-09-23T06:30:35.181-07:002011-09-23T06:30:35.181-07:00Great tension in this piece Sherry. I was totally...Great tension in this piece Sherry. I was totally caught up in it. Loved the twist at the end. Ending with a grin, what a nice touch.Annhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07524878248746427258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-31157686598987672142011-09-23T00:36:34.771-07:002011-09-23T00:36:34.771-07:00Wow that was a unique way to approach the challeng...Wow that was a unique way to approach the challenge. I'm sure we all had to look up most of those words. My entry is #56.<br /><br /><br />Lee<br /><a href="http://tossingitout.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Tossing It Out</a>Arlee Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11663942782929929334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-38787218442758042982011-09-22T23:10:54.339-07:002011-09-22T23:10:54.339-07:00I loved the twist. You did a wonderful job with t...I loved the twist. You did a wonderful job with those words.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-55200000204408850282011-09-22T20:45:56.692-07:002011-09-22T20:45:56.692-07:00Awesome twist that was very cleverly written. Grea...Awesome twist that was very cleverly written. Great job.F.E. Sewellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04222968586032981217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6322431252731850573.post-30753936042062108452011-09-22T20:01:54.770-07:002011-09-22T20:01:54.770-07:00That twist was certainly unexpected. :) Great job!...That twist was certainly unexpected. :) Great job!Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02768840794020850470noreply@blogger.com